When Superman Saves The Day
It was then when superman was asleep mystique was at her house planning to do a massive heist at the metropolis bank. The next morning superman woke up dressed in his superhero suit ready to go to work. When superman got to work he was waiting until there was someone to rescue, he realized that he left his door unlocked so he flew back home and saw the door open. When superman opened the door he saw the house was in a pigsty which wasn’t like that before he left so he knew someone had been spying on him and robbed him.
When he got inside he went to the kitchen he saw his wife there, then he realized that his wife was at work so he went to his “wife” and then said who are you his “wife” said mystique while turning into a bird and flew away over all the skyscrapers. She is not getting away said superman, so superman flew over the skyscrapers and chased mystique until she got to a flock of birds just up the road. Superman kept a eye on the birds to see if one of them flew off. Then he did see a bird fly away then it went to the ground and changed to a different animal that superman couldn’t even see, so superman flew on top of one of the skyscrapers and just sat there. Then he saw some people getting robbed so he flew down and then grabbed the robbers then got the bags for the people that got robbed and chucked the people far away with his super strength. Then he went to his house and lay on the couch and fell asleep. Superman got woken up by an alarm across the road so he went to the window and he saw a bird with a bag full of money. Superman changed into his superhero suit and flew to the bird and grabbed it then went to the ground, when he got to the ground the bird changed into a lizard and grabbed the bag then put it on the ground and turned into a lion. Superman just thought that he can’t always work by himself so he called the justice league for backup so that he knew for sure that he can catch mystique. But then mystique turned into a cheetah just when the justice league came, so flash chased mystique and caught her and grabbed her so that she couldn’t get away. After superman took her and put her into handcuffs and she got sent to jail with strong walls so that she can’t break them. That was the day that superman saved the day.
Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing. I like how included all the different animals Mystique changed into, and I also like all the labels you used for this blog post. Remember to include capital letters when you are writing a characters name e.g. Mystique, Superman...
Also remember to separate your paragraphs with 1 or 2 lines so we can see the difference between beginning, middle and end. I also think you could have described some feelings of the characters. For example: how did Superman feel when he went home to find it trashed? Did he feel tired at all while he was chasing Mystique?
Remember to include this weeks R.T and N.L at the top of your writing. Also include a quick statement about your learning at the beginning of your post. For example, "This week we are learning to write a narrative from 1st or 3rd person. Today my narrative will be from 3rd person point of view:.