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Why I Think The Borders Shouldn't Be Opened
Today i am going to talk to you about why the nz borders shouldn’t open, here are some reasons why i think they shouldn’t be shut.
Firstly,
If they are open there will be people flying into the country they could potentially have Covid - 19. Covid can inflame your lungs which causes infections. Covid - 19 will be a big impact on the country if we open our borders to the world, it can be very risky to open the borders. If covid - 19 gets into the country then we might have to go into lockdown and nobody wants that to happen again.
Secondly,
Some of the other countries are doing raelly bad for example lets say the UK they are treating it like the flu, but Covid is much worse than the flu so then if we open the borders we will be at risk to covid from the UK people. Here are some more countries that are doing bad, US, Brazil, India, Mexico, Peru, Russia and Indonesia.
Lastly,
I strongly believe that if we do open the borders than the people that travel to nz should be fully vaccinated, but if they are not fully vaccinated then they won’t get to go onto the plane to nz, it will be to much of a risk for the borders to be open.
Kia ora Michael,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing. I like how you used facts to support your points, such as explaining how the UK is treating COVID like the flu. I also like how you explained what COVID does to the body.
I think next time you could have explained more about UK treating COVID like the flu. What is their country doing? Why are they treating COVID like the flu?
Keep up the awesome work!