NL:Narrate
RT:Include Characters
Purpose:Entertain
Auidience:Anyone
What If Everyone In The World Was Vegetarian
It all started when i woke up and then went to the supermarket and i went to get some meat and there was none, so i went to the lady at the counter and said why is there no meat, and she said because the whole world is going to be vegetarian, i was in such a shock. When i finished my shopping i raced back home and told everybody about whats happening and they were just as shocked as i was. Once i told them that i went to a shop that sold fruit and vegetable seeds and brought as many as i could because there might be a fruit and vegetable shortage. Now we growing fruits and vegetables because the supermarket has ran out of them. One night we were listening to the news and they said for everybody to grow there own fruit and vegetables because the supermarket can’t supply you the whole time. We were thinking that the plants would take too long to grow so we waited until we ran out of fruit and vegetables then the next day we ran out we went to the news place and said to them that the plants would take too long to grow and we should just eat meat because we don’t have enough fruit and vegetables. Since they were live so they said everybody just stop being a vegetarian because we don’t have any fruit and vegetables left so if you want to starve you be a vegetarian. Then when they said that we went straight to the supermarket and brought some meat. That night we had some delicious meat!! It was so good not having to eat only fruit and vegetables.
Kia ora Michael,
ReplyDeleteI like the ideas you used in your writing, like supermarkets no longer selling meat. I also like how your characters discovered it would take too long to grow fruit and vegetables for the whole world.
Next time I think you could use paragraphs in your writing (beginning, middle and end). I also think you should try and use speech marks when a character is talking. For example, "Hello".