Thursday, September 23, 2021

My writing week 9 term 3

The Day I Woke Up With Superpowers


One morning i woke up, but i wasn’t in my room i was in the middle of a desert. Then i took a good look around and in the distance i could see a town, the town looked poor, so i got up and went to the town and asked one of them to tell me where i was and they said California. The i said that i live ll the way over in New York but before he could say anything there were these people who looked like cowboys and they had guns so the man ran inside, then bam!! The man shot me. I was lying on the ground with blood everywhere, then i blacked out. About half an hour later my eyes randomly opened, at that moment i was so confused because i got shot but then i woke up or you could say came back to life. The next day i caught the next flight there was to New York. When i got to New York i knew that i had immortality because you can’t just come back to life. In the morning on the news it was breaking news and it was about a villain, then i realised that i could try and stop him because i can’t die. So i ran outside and ran to the city which is where the villain was, when i got there i saw the villain on the top of a building, so i went to the top of the building and there he was flying above my head. He dropped down so i punched him multiple times, he was on the ground weak, then when he stood up i pushed him as hard as i could and then he fell all the way to the bottom then i was assuming he was dead from the massive fall. After the villain died the whole town was very happy because they are not in danger. When i got to the bottom of the building there were already news reporters waiting for me to get interviewed. THE END

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Michael,

    I like how your character has the power of immortality and that your story is set in America. I be your character was fearless because he knew that he could not die.
    Maybe next time you could describe the characters feelings a bit more. For example, how did you feel waking up in a different town? scared? confused?
    Also make sure you read through your writing before you publish. You have quite a few lowers case "i", when it should be a capital letter. Also you need to include your R.T and N.L.

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