Why School’s Should Have Bike Tracks
Today I am going to talk to you about why schools should have bike tracks. Here are some reasons why schools should have bike tracks.
Firstly biking helps you get healthier and stronger bones. Biking reduces the chance of braking your bones. It also helps grow your bones so that they are stronger and are healthier.
secondly biking helps the students from geting obiese. Biking is the third best way to lose weight and here is why. It incersses your metabolism which allows you to burn more calories.
Thirdly biking can decrease your stress levels. If you have high stress levels it can cause many things like depression, heart disese, heart attacks, strokes, anxiety, etc. All of those things that were listed just then are really bad for your health.
I strongly believe that every school should have a bike track and those were all the reasons why schools should have bike tracks.
Kia ora Michael. I like how you have chosen bike tracks as the focus for your persuasive writing. You have used some great points and evidence to support your thinking. Next time make sure to double check you spelling and capital letters before you publish.
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